Tuesday, 30 June 2009

unit 67 evaluation question 5

Content/style of my work

I have many criticisms towards to content and style of my own work one of the main problems I have with my work is a lot of the minor details which I left out for example I left a lot of the characters skin colours completely one colour when I could have added a variation in colour or simple a texture or some lighting effects to make it appear more realistic.

There are also irregularities with the backgrounds, for instance with frame 6 the buttons on the wall are inconsistent with the same buttons in frame 8, this makes the storyboard look unprofessional and messy, another thing I would have to note is the black boarders around each frame are incredibly inconsistent, for example the border around frame 1 is very thin, while the border around frame 7 is incredibly thick, the border also overlaps the image, and leaves unsightly white patches everywhere.

Despite the content problems the style of the storyboard is cartoony and colourful, as well as being consistent throughout the storyboard.

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